Sare Agama

I just asked him... He has no CLUE what it means either. :lol: Ygaron, If you are going to post a SONG on here, it has to at least make ...

*Falls into fits of helpless giggle snorts* Awesome!!!!!! :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: Antarctica falls on BELLA *Giggle snorts even harder* :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: ...

Ooers! :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: I always wanted to see a fanfic on this series! :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: It's too short!!!

It gets a little confusing with the Dragoon AND the Dragon. I can't seem to keep track of them. Let's just say, Dragoon and Dragon don't belong in the same ...

This is really good, considering it's a draft. Like chocoholic said, it's a bit rushed. Also, this sentence needs to be fixed. lying long time It should be "lying a ...

Awesome, Kyte! I love this piece, though I wonder the same as everyone else: where's the rest? Flickering embers made shadows of his features. I'm not sure this part makes ...

Nice, like the rest of the story. Not really anything that needs to be fixed, except for the part when Brightpaw helped carry Sunpaw. Looking forward to the rest, PM ...

With some work, I think this story could be very good. I'll point out the thing you probably should change, and then the things you should definitely keep. Wintermoon glanced ...

I really like it, nothing wrong about it as far as I can tell. “You really don’t think I’m a coward?” She shook her head fervently. “No. And you know ...

Interesting. I agree with some others, about how everything happens so fast. [quote]I swapped my paws out ferociously getting only fur each time. Instead of swapped, you might want to ...

I really like it. I have read the books, and you have done a pretty good job of making it sound like Erin Hunter was writing it. Awesome beginning! 8) ...

Really nice. One of the reasons I really like it is because I have read the books, and the format is very similar. The only critiques are the same as ...

I really love your story, even though it has some errors. That's understandable, considering the fact that you only had about 20 minutes to write. Anyway, back to the errors. ...